Adolf+Hitler

Hitler started off with a bad backgroud. He grew up in hopes of being an artist, but he dropped out of high school and failed becoming one. When World War I started it gave him an outlet; Hitler joined the army and eventually became very active in Germany's nationalist ways. When the war didn't reslut in favor of the Germans, it led to the Treaty of Versailles. The treaty led to resentment from the Germans who had liked the democratic government in Germany. *This sentence does not make sense. Do you mean to say that the German government blamed the democratic government? Hitler joined a group that believed they had to overturn the treaty and go against the communist people. T he group was called the National Socialist German Workes' Party, shortened to Nazis. Hitler eventually became the leader of the Nazi's and looked to Benito Mussolini for inspiration in having a fascist government. When Hitler was arrestind in 1923 he wrote Mein kampf (My Struggle) which, in the end, proved to be his way of saying what would happen if he was in charge.The book wasn't taken very serioiusly and when Hitler was let out of prison he went back to the Nazi party. Hitler had strengthened the N azi party and was building it up more and more when he had the chance for real power. In 1933 Hitler bcame the chancellor. Hitler b e gan to get more power and shape the people he controlled, demanding a dictoral power with absolute control. He expanded the military, breaking the treaty, and also began breaking othes and annexing different pieces of land. **remember the reader might not know what treaty he was breaking. make sure that you are clear about this in your writing. Also, the tenses are a bit mixed up: expanded, breaking, etc. Hitler took control of all the Germans and started going by his persecution of Jews. He used Jews as an excuse for why Germany was in such trouble, and soon he was controling every aspect of everyone's life. He also continued  annexing more and more land, which would eventually lead to another war.

I think that you could have done a seperate entry on the Nazi Party and Mein Kampf.